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Module Thirteen: Reflections and Perfections?

In first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on August 6, 2010 at 6:47 pm

  << Review, Reflections, & Revision in Progress will be completed August 22, 2010   >>

Action Plan Motto “Get’r Done Now!”"ENGL 1301 & 1302 as presented online at TTU requires in depth skills prior to taking the course. Third party labs should be purchased well in advanced prior to taking this course to ensure you will be prepared. I can see where the Bedford online tools would help. I also believe some of the Pearson Mastering course could prepare you. By then you could clep out or take an AP test. Unless you are prepared in advance, taking this course expecting to learn from lectures or lectures notes is a false expectation promoted by the CODE and the ENGL Catalogue entries.”As with any project, selecting a contractor to provide services requires careful specification. The terms and conditions of any contract can come into ambiguity because the less than stellar precision if the English Language. 

Where Textbook does not mean textbook and where other aspects of the pedagogy has been evolved, hybridized, or otherwise altered for profits[this may not be a bad thing when accomplished for good of the student community]. I am still teaching myself with little or no real added value from this course and the provision provided online or offline by the TTU English Department. I have yet to complete the portion of the course and am working to complete an incomplete. Reflections on perfections? Once you do without any feedback or mentoring one will be little better than a monkey at a typewriter.Not only the writing theory is lacking dissertation within the scope and text of the anthology we find as in “First Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines”; there is little if any available feedback systematized in the framework of the Raider Writer.

As a Learning Management System, Raider Writer fails miserably on many levels. From a system engineering outlook this is at the best an alpha code that has yet to be tested for metrics of design standards. Real lack if system specification adds noise to the relationship of the student-learning aka  audience & consumer with the contributor that would be the English Departments Teacher of Record and the Document reviewers.I believe I have learned this is more complex in its construction than intended. My goal at this juncture is to complete the course and to student the comparative day to day changes of the distance blog from the first days of the class in June to the present and to compare it to the other content online from previous version of prior or current instructors.

Clearly, this distance blog is not instructional other than providing additional assignment material and some dialogue of motivation.  For any real instructional one must pay Pearson or others to learn the aspects presented in the textbook and then take this course as a “final exam” for credit.The current state of the art in this area of student writers has clearly eclipsed the TTU English Department’s understanding and they perfect this current curriculum for online distance learning with lectures being replaced with content of the Pearson Custom Textbook and any other product offered by Pearson Learning Systems. Other than the test features of the Bedford products online the real value is in the St. Martin’s Handbook 6/e in hardback. In the art and the science of writing or authoring works it is more about the relationships of your own peer group you can recruit and call upon for critique and review of the works and how they may or may not be accomplished by your current draft.The social metrics of WP and Raider Writer as presented in this course do not provide for this team approach to writing.

In the real world, I can offer from my own experiences this can be accomplished both online and directly in Face to Face networking. Black Board and other e-Learning Management Systems provide for this team-social connectivity lacking in the English Department @ TTU first year writing online courses. I am sure in time with additional money, code, and talent that this system may evolve. The real question is the quest worth the delay when off the shelf tools exceed the means of the current destination of the Raider Writer System Design Protocols?I am not a better writer today because of this program. I have however benefitted greatly from Library 1100 online course and can whole heartedly recommend it to all. Without that course, I doubt I would have been in a position to struggle to the bitter ends in this course.

This is not about personalities. This is solely a matter of definition of design and TC of the original catalogue specification for the course. I believe in the future some or all of these issues raised will have to be address by University College “CODE” and how this course is promoted “sold” to the consumer. I did not take the initial course ENGL 1301 so my comments are limited to the review of this Summer Semester 2010 and the prior online blogs of previous classes for ENGL 1302 both online or in class. Few if any citations exist in the online distance blog are made to the previous website with prior content. I do not suggest error or failure to cite but would strongly suggest all take note this is malformed in its totality and should be reviewed, revised, republished, and retained in a fixed format with annual review to be in sync with the next Textbook Editions from Pearson or others who may contract such custom editions textbooks or other handbooks.   

Once I am completed in the full aspects of the assignments found in the Raider Writer table  labeled Syllabus, I will have to revisit this post to add a final reflection. The course syllabus is segmented and embedded across the modules on the distance blog, the Pearson First Year Writing: Writing Across the Disciplines, Raider Writer Code, and the course standards maintained by the English Department. Part of the course challenges is to piece it all together into you own action list. Any enabling skills you may not have or cannot acquire from the textbook will have to seek other sources of help. Writing Center may provide some help but again if you do not have the skills to begin with at the first of this course, be prepared to get addition labs or “mastering” training elsewhere. Library.ttu.edu is a great tool to find online audios, videos, etc. for “Rhetoric & Composition” … even You-tube(TM) is a great place to look.

Module Ten: Working in Style

In first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on August 6, 2010 at 5:57 pm

In this module, I repeat the DAR process for revision of a new paragraph segment. Immediately below is an original, revised, and reflection on DAR for this selected segment.

Original:

The Gutenberg Press, invented by Johannes Gutenberg in 1468, is recognized as critical factor in ending the Dark Ages at the dawn of Europe’s Renaissance. Often, with the advent of new technologies, authored works do not utilize all available communication pathways that can originate from a published page. In this joy ride [research] interloping field theory subtopic of  SC. I explore published works that have GL Model at their center of focus in order to compare English and non-English methods used to convey thoughts on this topic. 21st Century publishing is still rooted in the standards of the past. Modern Desktop publishing as we know it today began in the mid-1980s and matured with the advent of Windows® 95 and MicroSoft® Office in 1995. June of 2010 Microsoft® released their latest toolset as Office 2010. Adobe® also has become a leader in publishing tools providing rich media standards that are now accessible via Adobe® Acrobat®9 or later versions. Just as the Renaissance began to burn away the Darkness of the Dark Ages in Europe, WWW with rich media hubs is now accelerating the multisensory exchange of knowledge based in online hypertext libraries.

Revised:

The Gutenberg Press, invented by Johannes Gutenberg in 1468, is recognized as a critical factor in ending the Dark Ages at the dawn of Europe’s Renaissance. Often, with the emergence of new technologies, authored works do not use all available communication pathways that can emerge from a published page. In this joy-ride, I start a quest for insight interloping field theory subtopic of SC. I consider published works that have GL Model at their center of attention. My initial steps were in order to compare English and non-English methods used to convey thoughts on this topic. 21st Century publishing is still rooted in the standards of the past. Modern Desktop publishing as we know it today began in the mid-1980s and matured with the advent of Windows® 95 and MicroSoft® Office in 1995. On June of 2010, Microsoft® released the most prevalent tool set “Office 2010″. Adobe® also has become a leader in publishing tools providing rich media standards that are now accessible via Adobe® Acrobat®9 or later versions. The dawn of Renaissance began to burn the Darkness of the Dark Ages in Europe away, WWW with rich media hubs is now accelerating the multisensory exchange of knowledge based in online hypertext libraries.

Reflection:

This remains a  work in progress and on hold due to limited response from the TTU STAFF and the WC is closed until next semester starts. For those who collect absurd ambiguities of English WC does not mean water closet in the British Framework but for Writing Center as promoted by Writing Across the Curriculum geeks promote it across the USA. Real 21st Century Writing in meant to be a team sport. Role play as coach, mentor, editor, peer and more is needed in any instructors relationship with a student writer. Instructors who fail to bring this to the table are not committed to the such of the young writer. Empowerment should not be confused with doing it for the student. Enabling objectives in this empowerment process include many steps. Leave one step out and just as in dance, the whole process is out of step…

My reflection here is simple. Real work as a writer can be lonely if you fail to involve others. In fact, that is the reason most writers fail. Success in writing, if not for your own personal use, requires an audience. Ancient Rhetors knew to practice delivery meant not only to script your discourse but to craft the words for the process of entering the audiences cognitive foyer.  To ease the ears into acceptance of the thought you want to share. Plain Language standards around the globe is not meant to limit a writer’s work but to expand the working into adjacent languages so that a larger audience can be accessed. Plain English is the global standard in force today by common agreement. New writers need to embrace this in their future works. This embrace will ensure their share of a global audience.

I believe I can find a writers group online where I will have access to peers and to editors who can assist me in my professional works. For now, I am restricted to the limits of this course as designed and with their intent at creating a virtual teacher embedded in the so called custom edition of First Year Writing: Writing Across the Disciplines. I have great hope future renditions of this course will embrace more modern online methodologies as other University/Colleges have accomplished [MIT, National University, Penn Foster, Harvard, Regents, etc.].

Module Nine: Peer Critique

In first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on August 6, 2010 at 5:54 pm

For this module, I chose one paragraph segment of 8 sentences from my argument.   “diagnose, analyze, revise,” DAR… [Ref: pages 246-247 First Year Writing: Writing Across the Disciplines].

Peer Critiques play a valued role in any writer’s inner circle &  ”Mastermind”.  Peer Critiques are not the same as an Editor’s critique with actionable marks. Both are necessary for any writer to discover, acquire, develope, and access their next level as a productive writer. Self critique with revision methods is where your maturity as a writer grows the most. Below is an attempt at revision from a self critique as there was no access to peer or editorial critiques from this class.

Original:

DARPA’s Arpanet evolved into a hypertext relay during the last half of the 20th Century. As methods and means outstripped the existing architectures of personal computing, Microsoft® Windows 95 with WWW browsers led the way for rich media to enrich all communication communities during the Spring of 1995. I was born and served my country during the Cold War. Since I could remember, I have played with computers, computer parts, and embraced intelligent networks all of my life. During the early 1980, I maintained an Arpanet Node at DARPA’s BRL in Aberdeen, MD for two years. From this vantage point, I knew the world was changing beyond what we had into a gigabit entanglement[GE]. We now know GE as the World Wide Web [WWW]. My research with conjecture includes an analytical decomposition of cited documents in plain language via a literature review to recompose an ordered acquisition of how knowledge on a topic can be a joy ride interloping field theory via virtual online pages.

Revision:

DARPA’s Arpanet evolved into a hypertext relay during the last half of the 20th Century. WWW deployment across the global backbone network quickly outdated the existing architectures of personal computing. Microsoft® Windows 95 with WWW browsers blazed a trail for rich media to enhance all communication communities during the Spring of 1995. I was born and did serve my country during the Cold War Era. Since I could remember, I have played with computers, computer parts, and embraced intelligent networks all of my life. During the early 1980, I maintained an Arpanet Node at DARPA’s BRL in Aberdeen, MD for two years. From this vantage point, I knew the world was changing beyond what we had into a gigabit entanglement[GE]. We now know GE as the World Wide Web [WWW]. My researched theory includes a systematic decomposition of cited Plain Language documents. My literature review recomposed an ordered acquisition of how knowledge on a topic can be a joy ride seeking insights interloping field theory via virtual online page content.

Reflection “DAR”:

In my classical arguement’s introductory paragraph, I discovered my sentence structures were too complex. In addition, some had serious errors on verb construction or omissions. I noted the need to preserve the imagery of the notions portrayed in this text while improving the sentence size, scope, and structural sequence. There was little to go on at first. I had not supportive team in place for peer or editorial critiques. the goal of revision is to improve the piece for the reader and the thesis discoursed. I hope this is an improved version that will continue to be revised and corrected this week. You inputs are welcome and appreciated… thanks in advance.

Module 8: Wind Energy: Green Boundary Limits using Ciceronian Model

In Apologetics, first year writing, Research, Rhetoric & Composition on July 13, 2010 at 3:51 pm

Wind Energy: Green Boundary Limits

My focus is on exploring the question “Is Wind Energy Green & Fully Renewable?”                                 


Classical Ciceronian argument elementals are a subset of the the modern 8 parts to an argument… exordium, narratio, propositio, partitio, confirmatio, confutatio, Digressio and peroratio.

Exordium is an introduction to gain the audience’s attention & prepares their hearts and minds. 

  1. Exxon Valdez Tanker incident that continues to be cleaned up. Has recently become the number two incident since the BP disaster in the Gulf of Mexico.
  2. A comment about the fears once expressed during the oil embargo with long lines at the gas pumps

Narratio is a narration to provide the background information necessary to establish topical context on an averred factual basis.

  1. The new language of alternative fuels is Renewable Energies.
  2. List some of the forms of energy that constitute Renewable.
  3. Provide why Coal is not truly renewable within the scope of the definition.
  4. Why Geo-thermal may not be so green.
  5. How the history of Wind Energy for the Americas helpt to tame and domesticate the wilds of North America.

Propositio is a proposition that presents the thesis of an argument.

  1. Important to set the bounds or scope of the presentation: My focus is on exploring the question “Is Wind Energy Green & Fully Renewable?”                                 
  2. What is the social impact of Wind Energy industry with large scale expansion of the nation’s Mega-grid system does not consider all the potentials or many alternatives. 
  3. Where should America go considering the T. Boone Plan “WE & Natural Gas” a centralized plan or “Photo Voltaic hybridized with a Hydrogen Economy” that is decentralized from the national grids.
  4. Will there be similar mistake in Wind Energy Industry as seen in the Oil exploitation by consortium mega-corporations?

Partitio is a dialogue partition that provides supportive statements in delineated steps that forecast steps of argument to a conclusion or to dispute an existing conclusion as flawed.

  1. Wind Energy is from the Sun.
  2. Environmental Impact Studies should be real not just paper for the sake of building Wind Farms.
  3. Long Term studies will have to be longitudinal as to their ongoing modification of the adjacent eco systems.
  4. Wind Credits are being used to “Clean the Reputation” of other power brokers. Why? How? Will it help?
  5. Nature is forcing Humans to find alternatives and to become more responsible. Will their be time to adapt? Will the biosphere recover?
  6. Good News … changes in consumer understanding.
  7. Need for continued government incentives to prevent Coal and Oil mega-Corps from stopping expansion of Wind Energy
  8. Blend and tie it all into the conclusion…

Confirmatio is a confirmation statement(s) that dialogues to prove thesis is true.

  1. Wind Energy has a green thumb print but is not perfect.
  2.  Wind Energy has limits to being green.
  3. There are those who would once again seek to monopolize WE corridors and strangle production to control current inventory values of Coal, Oil, and Gas.
  4. Grass roots and decentralized grid is critical to provide competition to the centralized model.

Confutatio (Reprehensio) is a confutation to refute opposing viewpoints to the given thesis.

  1. Green house gases are a reality. Whether the globe is warming or cooling there is historical evidence the globe is dynamic in its weather patterns.  Wind Energy does not seem to affect this dynamic one way or the other. More research is needed.
  2. Nuclear and carbon based fuel system all pose real problems for the biosphere. Economic instabilities exist because of the addiction to energy based infrastruction.
  3. Consumers are blind to their role. Conservation does not have to co-exist with higher energy prices.

Digressio is a digression to dialogue related points to add color, flavor, or other values.

  1. Wind Energy can blend into the environment or the viewscapes.
  2. Wind Energy can be accomplished without High Tension lines.
  3. Wind Energy can be decentralized for personal use or community uses.
  4. Wind Energy provides jobs that will help small towns grow again.

Peroratio is a peroration to conclude providing a call for action desired from the audience (sums up, arouses indignation with pity).

  1. Each generation must leave this planet to the next generation. We each have an ethical obligation to do this with the least debt and the least harm.
  2. Without government incentives or citizen owned coops, Wind Energy will be controled by the same interests who control current fuel inventories.
  3. Call to action is to learn more, read more, and to do more to promote renewables especially Wind Energy.
  4. Energy independence could take place in less than 20 years if we all stand together for the needed changes.

The six Ciceronian parts of the oration or discourse are Exordium,  Narratio,  Partitio, Confirmatio,  Reprehensio and Peroratio.

Supportive references: First Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines & University of Texas: Ancient Rome ; http://www.utexas.edu/courses/romanciv/rhetoric.htm 

I concluded the following from my studies and past experience:

Classical Ciceronian argument elementals are a subset of the the modern 8 parts to an argument… exordium, narratio, propositio, partitio, confirmatio, confutatio, Digressio and peroratio.

Exordium is an introduction to gain the audience’s attention & prepares their hearts and minds. 

  1. The intro help the speaker and the audience prepare to become open
  2. Use of humor can help to flush distraction away while opening the doors to the mind to pay attention. This provided the needed feedback to the speaker to adjust the talk.

Narratio is a narration to provide the background information necessary to establish topical context on an averred factual basis.

  1. This is the element of the apology where one uses the rules of evidence to establish what are the pertenent facts to attend to when testing the truth concerning the position of the speaker.
  2. A well prepared narrative will  help speaker to set the mental stage for acceptance of the remainder of the dialogue.

Propositio is a proposition that presents the thesis of an argument.

  1. Important to set the bounds or scope of the presentation.
  2. This prompts the audience to the need to what you will argue for or against.

Partitio is a dialogue partition that provides supportive statements in delineated steps that forecast steps of argument to a conclusion or to dispute an existing conclusion as flawed.

  1. Expansion is like opening the door wider to glimpse the realness of the statements made.
  2. This supplies the anchors for both the speaker and to audience to visualize the truth.

Confirmatio is a confirmation statement(s) that dialogues to prove thesis is true.

  1. This is to promote connections of the partition are connected to the truth.
  2.  This a place where one confirms both the logic and emotion of the truth for each person affected.

Confutatio (Reprehensio) is a confutation to refute opposing viewpoints to the given thesis.

  1. This is the place where the connections of the confirmation are reinforced for the audience to learn and for the speark to read the feedback from the audience (if live).
  2. Important place where one seperates the voters for, against, or undecided.

Digressio is a digression to dialogue related points to add color, flavor, or other values.

  1. Additional opportunity to ensure the audience will reflect more on this even after the dialogue is over.
  2. Reinforces the cognitive memory experience.

Peroratio is a peroration to conclude providing a call for action desired from the audience (sums up, arouses indignation with pity).

  1. This is the place to offer WIIFM group who vote for the speakers position and offer is placed before them to carry on the cause with future action.
  2. This is the place to offer those who vote against to reconsider and to show them the easy of supporting the cause with straight forward actions.
  3. This is the place to tip the undecided to accept the action plan provided in support of the speakers position.

Comments are welcome!

~~ Finé ~~

 

Table of Contents
 I. Introduction …………………………………………………………………………………….. 2
II. The Ginzburg–Landau Equation models superconductivity ………………… 3

III. English Language Notions ………………………………………………………………. 5

IV. Numerical Notations, Notions, Plain English Rubric …………………………… 6

V. Conclusions ………………………………………………………………………………….. 13

VI. Acknowledgements ……………………………………………………………………….. 14

VII. References …………………………………………………………………………………… 15

NOTICE: …………………………………………………………………………………………….. 16

Module 7: Supportive Logic “Deduction vs Induction”

In first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on June 30, 2010 at 1:44 am

Induction and Deduction are just directional values on the manifold of knowledge relationally connecting the Specific to the General in Time-Space:

All arguments have two parts. The initial stated part is commonly called a premise. The premise sets the stage for the argument to begin in support of the conclusionary statement. The Conclusion is often a hopeful solution to a problem that will require additional testing. This methodology gave birth to the modern Scientific Methodologies used to discover much of what we know today. From the problem statement to the initial premise then to the conclusion presenting a solution for the problem statement, each writer must be able to use two forms of reasoning:

  1. Inductive Reasoning
  2. Deductive Reasoning

 What are the difference between deductive and inductive reasoning? The beginning of any journey is the plan for the first step. DR- Deductive Reasoning… IR- Inductive Reasoning are symbiotic twins conjoined within our cognitive process used to discern truths as we seek solution space for our discovered problem set in time-space.  Reasoning that flows from the general to the specific is DR. Reversing that process direction involves processing from the specific to a general solution or theory yields IR. So, we answer the question with a statement concerning reasoning process which yields a solution from cognitive space such that  specific knowledge exists at one end of the manifold and the general knowledge at the other end:       

 Knowledge is both Specific and General in nature. Solution Space is potentially populated majoratively either by S or G. When a conclusion exists in S & G space then one may conclude solution is not normal, rational or is in some fact flawed.

  1.   Specific<= |entry A|>> reasoning process =>General|exit A|          would be DR as accomplished by Newton
  2.  |exit  B|Specific<=  reasoning process<< |entry B| =>General          would be IR as accomplished by Sally
  3. |DRexit|Specific<= |IRentry|>> reasoning process<<|DRentry| =>General|IRexit| your entry point determines your form of resoning and the partition of knowledge you will arrive at with your conclusion.

Deductive example- Sally deduced that she was held on the Earth by Gravity after learning Newton’s Laws. Her DR process used accepted beliefs she was taught as laws or theorems from which she then related to specific aspect in her own existence why she did not float away from the Earth.

Inductive example- Newton used inductive reasoning to formulate his discoveries about motion, acceleration, and forces after seeing an apple fall from a tree. Newton’s example was one of IR process that he had studied, journals  observations with measurements, and experimented to then make an insightful leap that gravity existed. His further work elaborated on force, mass, accelerations, and how these related with relation to mass with Gravity explained the weight of an object.

An enthymeme includes omitted premise (assumptions) disclosing two statements [introductory premise & conclusionary solution] that leads the audience to a decision point accepting a desired position of the enthymeme’s author. For some, this would be an improper syllogism aka deductive argument in three parts,  an argument that to be true must in the eyes of the audience who hold as true an unstated factoid supported by the circumstance of the presentation. The assumption need not be true except in the mind’s eye of the audience. Testing of the factoid for truth will explain why the quick conclusions could be wrong. Insufficient logic is seductive for many who fail to understand the hidden dangers of such available poisonous fruit packaged as truth aka “factoids”.  Western literature has immortalized Socrates as being mortal. This in part is due circulation of translations with discussion of ancient Greek works.

All mortals are human is an unstated truth as one is quotes, “Socrates is human!” then states in a eureka moment, “therefore, Socrates is mortal.” Incomplete arguments should never be considered true until vetted by more thorough examinations.

Major premise:  Jose Cuervo drinks will attract the people you desire…

Minor premise: the recipe for your success is in how you order the drink at the bar must include the brand name “Jose Cuervo”

Conclusion: you will relax and find satisfaction with the new company that you will attract … and there are no ill effects from their product …

Note: Sadly there are great ill affects to the use of alcohol and relational expansion or social entertainment that can lead to poor judgments. Being less that diligent when examining arguments can cost lives and social impacts that communities can least afford today.

Visual reinforcement are made throughout the video found online at You Tube … http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LiV0vvFvl1M

What are the advantages of examples? The example in many argument can and often do reveal subtle truths needed by the audience to form a decision based on the conclusion presented.

 The drawbacks?  the example in many argument can and often do reveal evidence against the conclusion. Using the rules of evidence, it is the responsibility of an attorney to argue for their clients best interests. To do so requires active listening skills and a swift structured come back to show the flaws in any wrongful conclusions suggested by the examples from the opposing side.

Either form of reasoning can have or demonstrate an argumental premise that is unstated. Such elemental argument components are often called assumptions. The existance of such premise being unstated does not mean they are not present or not presented. They can exist in the audience experiencial knowledge sets {S,G} or in some other sensory material {Visual, Auditory and Kinesthetic that is not a part of spoken/signed language system}. Such unstated elements can and often do invoke a neurolinguistic response that suspends reality checking and expressively drives the thinking audience to a destinations that is beyond sound judgement.

In formal analysis, serious review should attempt to declare such assumption with the given variables, formulae, axioms, theorems, constants, or influence suggested through other than a single sensory input.

Induction and Deduction are just directional values on the manifold of knowledge relationally connecting the Specific to the General in Time-Space. The reasoning style chosen establishes our direction of traveling through problem knowledge space to the valid solution in knowledge space. The soundness of the arguments relationship to the proof-concluded requires completeness of the reasoning step wise process. Accepted conclusions can then be added to the General to be called upon to be used as axiom for future arguments to explore new connections from the P-TimeSpace to S-TimeSpace. These should consider the modern assessment that we are in an immediate 4-tupal space … Time-Space {x,y,z,t} when seeking more advanced conclusions. Best practices of reasoning to resolve rhetorical argument are ones that require precise language agreed upon by largest group possible. Problem Solving is all about designing solution by clarifying the argument. Use of language gives the reader proper cues as to what is a premise and what is a conclusion. Relational rationales require proper use of induction/deduction directional values to reach sound connection that span [ Specific knowledge <==> General knowledge]. Standard solution exclusively  exist in one or the other. Where special cases exist, a solution can be consider to exist in both sets. For the most part the direction of reasoning demands the destination to be exclusive. I hope will open further areas of this topic for more argumental evaluations or debate.

Comments are welcome!

~~ Finé ~~

Module 2: Greeks, Topoi, & Apologies

In first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on June 27, 2010 at 9:17 pm

 ”Ideology is the study of any body of beliefs, doctrines, values held by a single individual or by a group or a culture.”

The textbooks are what they are … new snapshots based on less than perfect translations of old things. I propose any difference existing of the ancients with today’s society would essentially be that we are just catching up with the prior state of the art or science of past epic days.

Ideology can as a word be decomposed to understand its elemental meaning.

“Ide” has been forged out of forgotten Endo-European tongues that bind the construct of more modern words:          Idè ->

  • idea
  • ideal.

In some vague intuition, I believe this is more about self-thought “cognition” at the first moment one ties together correspondence to any object real or virtual.

The terms would also break down further into   Idè -> both “i” one being part of who you are on the surface with e being the eureka part of the cognition while “ id” as self  and the “id” suggest something more Freudian in our subconscious.

Let us not forget the “ology” … more straight forward … the study of some category of things, people, methods, or just a sandbox of thought you choose to master and investigate.

Philosopher would review this as ideologies are what a class or a group of people would hold as their basic shared basis for a culture. Many philosophers misuses the term “ideology” to a degree that most in academia would accept todays use rather than what the Indo-European roots would suggest.

The Greeks are often credited with the art and science of Rhetoric. I was shocked that the modern academics would not look further back along the forensic timeline. Ancient Greeks gloried telling their stories with arguments to teach their young leaders how to accomplish control their tongue first, then how to use the tongue to control others. This was tradition of societies who trained their future elite for over five thousand years prior to the Greek city-states.

Even to the courts of the Pharaohs, the Emperors of China and the Emperor of Japan, the methods of how a topic was to be touched, written, spoken, argued, and apologetically argued further to promote polite warfare with words well-spoken to scratch the ears of men.

I do not see a difference in how the ancients or moderns differed much. The classical approach to rediscovery by Western Academics is the initially present a biased seed that it all began in Greece. We know of societies much older were in the Americas. Iconic structures some once only associated with Egypt have been found all over the Earth. As ancient languages have become decode, there is clear evidence of advance math, science, chemistry, medicine, rhetoric, government, language development, and much more.

I have been a computer programmer and hardware designer most of my life. I know 21st societies are rediscovering, remastering, and reconnecting the dots on language, history, and all other knowledge areas. When I wrote my first instructional Nano code or discovered how to write a virtual Turin Machine to solve a problem for Gulfstream Aerospace, the realization that we must treat words as power was breathtaking.

The age of object oriented program languages was just begun in force during the 1970s. Software students viewed this language advancement as a bold step into the future but it was actually based on concepts found in India among the ancient writings dating thousands of years. Linux was founded on the construct of recursion and recursive algorithms.

The energy in that power put to work is the thought we convey. Shocking this is not a discovery. There are primitive examples in history that goes to Chinese, Hindu, and more younger societal ancient writings that the word themselves could do more than change the hearts or minds of men or women but the mere face of existence itself.

Greek foundations in Rhetoric rest on the meta of languages and of the lost languages that we have inherited from our own ancestors that go beyond our own tongues claimed at birth.

Regardless of whether you believe ideology is the study of thought itself or the classification of societal boundary by their common foundational beliefs is just a word game. 21st Century English is not the language of just a few short decades ago. Because of epic dark ages that repeat themselves during the rise and falls of global governments, so we will see this discussion again in a few hundred years. There is little under this Sun any man or woman can lay claim to that is original. 

Ebbs and Eddies of time-space bring about the repetition of human events because choices made without judgment or foreknowledge. The “lessons-of-the-past-not-learned” play a role in this cycle of the rise and fall. Wisdom or mere chance will be at the heart of future debate over freewill or destiny of fate.

Knowing the cultural neighborhood in the current times we live is of course important. So important that before even becoming a tourist, one should research the destination to avoid conflicts or heartache. Ideologies are fundamental to academic success. Ideological wars brew every year a new tempest that young leaders (and old ones) must prepare to address in the best voice possible. Failing in this task brings at each tick of the clock a future world to rest on the brink of an argument with a potential to bring about chaos in our newest global order.

Communications rests in the hands of all who can speak, write, or song: addressing to find solutions to the arguments that divide us. To that greater view, I hold there is little difference today than at any other era when one must use Rhetoric to muster the apologetics of the moment. Good manners with sound thought to use rhetorical constructs in many languages that could attract new friends and turn away any angered enemy is my goal in learning to master writing at Texas Tech University.

If you were off to the community Forum today that would bring you here to my blog-place and beyond in the blogosphere. Comments are most welcome!

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Finally, I got to read/hear the text today (July 27, 2010)… reflection well, a bit belated -> I was shocked at the discontinuity of the overall structure of this chapter with the rest of the textbook. As often happens, editors who integrate large context from different sources can omit critical factors when cutting and pasting to create something new but not from their own inkwell. A view of the world changes greatly when one gets older. So one must disclose I have seen over a fifty years of various textbooks and computer aided courseware. The introduction of the concept for Rhetoric, Ideology, and construct of thought perspectives that define Ancient, Renaissance, and Modern Thought with a framework in Philosophy built upon a foundation of human nature. This task in reading this and the limited time to append my original module one will require  some forgiveness as I read and try to be focused on the text as a segment of a work that is not provided.

The Module one sub-page as it is defined in the Module page of our Distance Blog Guide lends its tasking to a glorious “to do” list. So with some delay, I am at it here to attach, append, and amend this post one last time.

 After reading the chapter, my initial response to the reading was really not printable! I am now extremely interested in this course, the time and resources that generated it and what is the real ultimate goal of TTU First Year Writing. Especially WIIFM aspects as an older student, as a consumer, as a future law student, and as tax payer how this new online digital portfolio will advance my learning to write better. I am confused why the methodology would be so invasive to the actual subject matter for this course. Learning to write at a college level should include how to form arguments and to respond to position or the dissertations of others for the betterment of the community at large. Online methodologies should not distract from the process of acquisitioning new knowledge with the related skills and abilities to demonstrate that knowledge was in fact embraced and incorporated into the student. This course tells us about ideologies… the study of ideas and the related social roots they are connected. Understanding the cultures over the time-line gives us a perspective of what is the motivation and impact of changing paradigms looking back through history. Since the dark ages and possibly further back in epic periods, this current age of learning is only just now rediscovery what was forgotten for a very long time. The essence of the art and science of rhetoric has driven this process of rediscovery and the reawakening of dead languages [Latin, Egyptian, Mayan, and others].

The beginning of the 21 Century we see a new emphasis of academics bantering how we have come a long way “Baby”. True, we are just that “babes” relearning what others before us have mastered. Are there classical demarcations formally defining what we should accept as modern or ancient. Yes, the book tells us how to perceive this deviation. But my own reflection is I do not really accept it as written and that is why I am here in College to research and to hone new skills to tackle the artifacts that are now available online to examine digitally and to transliterate into modern plain English. Rosetta Stone products will be my passage into the past by learning the offspring languages of Latin and eventually other languages that were spawned from the Indo-European language commons. The so called inventions of thought from Greece, Rome, and Alexandria clearly are resurgence of prior cultures. Even in the articles in Chapters 9 & 10 we see the influence of change to the US culture as multicultural embrace of our Modern English presses it into new forms with the creation of new words, sounds, and music. Language can be representative as Locke would have us believe. In addition, language can evolve via enumerations as is accomplished in computer science. Computer Languages are mere subsets of English and English is a variant of more ancient languages that have recombined over the past four hundred years.

It is unclear where our language will arrive or when it will stop mutating. It is my belief language as we now use it is a limiter. There was a time when all was passed down by those who were described as the remembering ones. Some who academically wrote on this mistakenly believes this was just merely an oral tradition passed on from generations to generation. Since History by conquering nations often required the destruction of these persons, little of this practice is really known today. With the advent of hierarchical text with graphics and rich media

we may once again rediscover new “old” aspects of being a rhetor and becoming a person who can orally promote knowledge through the thoughtful process of apologetics. Understanding the people in their shared beliefs as attributed to a locale or to a race or to a people committed to a central shared religion in necessary to know how to truly understand them and to solve problems together via diplomacy of leaders trained in Rhetoric. As modern people we tend to claim we embrace truth first, but we are more like the ancients than we would like to admit. The book stated that Ancients valued the language, the oratory, the methods of influence over the masses, and they were not willing to be limited to the truth. The ancients could be said to practice NLP and mass suggestion to control their culture within their society. As Orwellian it may seem, modern warfare has brought back to the current day these same practices via global news agencies and political movements in the past 100 years. It is the words that create memories or reawaken old ones. The language we choose is used to express and direct our energy to accomplish work in the ears, hearts, and minds of people that will read, reflect, and relate to our constructs of thoughts. 

Topology of the places in history where people have chosen to live can become and create markers in the spoken or written languages. When historical events encourage or force migration, then we can see over time demonstrable changes in the language both in intonation and detonation. The technology of publishing the written words also brings about the changes of evolving fonts, graphics, and today even animations. Some have in the past and today accepted that some words in our language evoke something beyond the mere enumerations associated with it in a dictionary. The modern studies of the brain has revealed that the chemistry of the person is affected by the frequency, repetition of context, and the manner in which it is displayed or conveyed to an audience. For the past thirty years this rediscovery of language “affects” can be seen demonstrated at Rap, Rock, Country, and Gospel events.

Shamans also knew this in the ancient past and more modernist like Norman Vincent Peale knew the power of the positiveness of words and the tonality of the language to bring about changes in our lives. The native language was an integral part of cultural identities. That is why military conquest required the process of killing the language of those who were considered to be strong enemies. This was a practice of the Churches in Europe and of the military in conquest of indigenous people for the past 200o years. USA even today obstructs the old languages of First Nations People and would have many believe such languages were somehow defective. Language can be both a dialect and a tongue. A tongue would be French, Japanese, or Dine’. The dialect would be something in the way the tongue is delivering the words that flavors it to a region, tribe, clan, or period in time. All of this is integral to the identity of ancients and of moderns though a modern person may be in denial of this truth.  

Virtualization has shown how we can as communicators change the perception of our realities. As we learn this in the 21 Century, I am reminded of the ancient texts that spoke of word that could create something out of nothing. From Hollywood to our desktop computers or game boxes, this is more true than ever before as best one can tell. Wow! Both then and now we as Human accept that words can harm, heal, help, or hurt others expose to them. Words in any language can begin or stop conflicts. Words alone are not enough to truly communicate our thoughts. As of this writing there is a new age of communication upon us in the 21 Century. I am excited to discover more about it.

Ancient Cannons of Western Rhetoric:

  • invention~ deciding assess your position and the premise perspectives you will present
  • disposition~ Flow… ordered sequential construction by design
  • expression~ calculate choice of words and response the words will create
  • memory~ establish cognitive recall naturally or practiced
  • delivery~ orally or via rich media

Rhetoric and Composition

In Apologetics, first year writing, Rhetoric & Composition on June 7, 2010 at 2:56 pm

In great need for the 21st Century, Netizens must rediscover how words, their use, topoi, and delivery influence the reception of the message or campaign. I have accepted the challenge to become a member in excellent standing with those in the Bar who hold such influence over the real decision of the rights of the child and the child’s right of access to their parents, culture, heritage, and language.

I have entered college with the purpose to have my bar license by 2016 based on academic honors. This goal is not a destination but a brief stop along the way to build my arsenal as an advocate deployed to argue for the child’s future estate.My first semester in Clarendon College established I am on my way to this gateway goal. I am now at Texas Tech University to further this process at the university level. I will study at the University College of London in 2011, in preparation for Law School at Texas Tech University. My advocacy will be primarily Pro Bono for left behind parents. It is my goal to overcome my lack of formal training in writing.In my technical career at Digital Equipment Corporation, I had been a part of the grand globalism of the WWW when I first maintained a DARPA ANTS node of the fledgling global net at Aberdeen PRG, MD. I was a part of the first wave of blogging as the World Wide Web took on a new posture with real standing in journalism.I quickly learned how less than progressive some educators and collegiate cultures were toward this new form of communication. Main stream America was not yet ready for this technology at the corporate office. A recent urban myth circulated that claimed,” All writers in the blogosphere were plagiarists and pirates!” Such mongering is convenient banter by those who feel threatened by any free speech forums. After more than a decade of blogs, it is clear that great writers write everywhere and anywhere. As a painter would wield their rainbows so does the writer master his art with toil over what word, font, rich media, image, graphic, or song to mix into the electric canvas.  Blogger are here to stay.It is my goal to establish my formal credentials. I am dedicated to profound use of technology to deliver the arguments to spread a viral call to action via the virtual quad of the new forum for thoughtful argument.I welcome all who read this post for any reasoned debate that is intend to be constructive for the rights of families with children. Web-trolls and other hate-mongers will be blocked. Adult content will not be allowed. I reserve the right to block any who violate TOS or decency.

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